tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13024760.post3140724674410570105..comments2023-10-04T06:21:04.949-07:00Comments on Writing into the Sunset: What's on the Page?Paty Jagerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03257614436422105729noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13024760.post-69048296528437526242011-01-31T15:19:58.594-08:002011-01-31T15:19:58.594-08:00Stacy, I agree with the head-hopping. If not done ...Stacy, I agree with the head-hopping. If not done well or too much you have to reread to figure out whose thoughts you just read.<br /><br />Congrats on having conquered the POV.Paty Jagerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03257614436422105729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13024760.post-85499567609292370452011-01-31T13:33:19.480-08:002011-01-31T13:33:19.480-08:00I prefer third person and that's how I write. ...I prefer third person and that's how I write. And surprisingly, I don't seem to have a problem with POV at all (in fact, that's usually what I'll spot when I'm critiquing someone else's work). But I'm not fond of head-hopping. Sometimes I have to re-read to figure out whose head I'm in (or where the switch occured).Stacy McKitrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07898731847653710759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13024760.post-91294392220108542092011-01-31T10:47:18.216-08:002011-01-31T10:47:18.216-08:00Hi Joy,
Thank you for your comments.Hi Joy,<br />Thank you for your comments.Paty Jagerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03257614436422105729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13024760.post-63426049318764759142011-01-31T10:24:09.708-08:002011-01-31T10:24:09.708-08:00Hi, Paty,
Great questions and I appreciate your PO...Hi, Paty,<br />Great questions and I appreciate your POV on the issue of POV. LOL. As an old fashioned reader, I prefer third person and in romance I don't have a problem with head hopping between the H&H for chapters. Great post.<br />Joy Held<br />Writer Wellness, A Writer's Path to Health and Creativity<br />Who Dares Wins PublishingAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com