Showing posts with label Action Adventure. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Action Adventure. Show all posts

Thursday, May 12, 2016

Writing a Character from Another Culture by Paty Jager



While coming up with the characters for my action adventure romance I wanted a hero who was a complete opposite of my heroine. I’d been visiting with a woman who had married a Venezuelan and had lived there for several years. Hearing about her life as an outsider and the way the men of Venezuela treated a woman, I thought that nationality would make my hero an interesting contrast to my genius, privately schooled heroine.

What I didn’t realize that while building Tino’s background I would throw in government turmoil (in Venezuela) his family fleeing that country and his teen and adult years being spent in the United States. With this as his background, I could give him the macho attitudes of the Latin men but also have him more tolerant of the heroine’s independence because he had lived in the states. His Latin machismo comes out when he is fighting his attraction to the skinny, brainy woman he wouldn't usually look at twice. He soon realizes it is her heart, genius, and innocence that embeds her in his heart.

Some of the culture things I found interesting about Venezuela dealt with how the men treated the women. From my friend’s account the women were treated like children. Given money for groceries and shopping and told when they could do things. The men refrained from vulgar language while around the women.

I used the language bit with Tino. He uses stronger curse words in his head and when Isabella isn’t around and a milder one when she is with him. While she grew up secluded and pampered, he faced many harsh realities in life and knows the seedy side as well as the affluent side. This both in his home land of Venezuela and in the states. 

Talking with someone who knows a culture well whether they are from that culture or has lived with them
is what helps me make my characters believable.
 
Blurb for Secrets of a Mayan Moon:
Child prodigy and now Doctor of Anthropology, Isabella Mumphrey, is about to lose her job at the university. In the world of publish or perish, her mentor’s request for her assistance on a dig is just the opportunity she’s been seeking. If she can decipher an ancient stone table—and she can—she’ll keep her department. She heads to Guatemala, but drug trafficking bad guys, artifact thieves, and her infatuation for her handsome guide wreak havoc on her scholarly intentions.

DEA agent Tino Kosta, is out to avenge the deaths of his family. He’s deep undercover as a jaguar tracker and sometimes jungle guide, but the appearance of a beautiful, brainy anthropologist heats his Latin blood taking him on a dangerous detour that could leave them both casualties of the jungle.

Excerpt:
Tino pulled the truck over and stepped out. He’d have to be more careful around the doctor. For all her gullibility, she had a mind that deducted and researched. Keeping his true identity a secret from her would be a challenge. He retrieved a can of Gallo and a canteen. He slid under the steering wheel, handed her the canteen, and popped the top on the beer.
She frowned. “You aren’t going to drink and drive? It isn’t even noon.”
Her attitude reminded him of his initial perspective of her, when he only knew her name. Sour and bossy. “Yes, this is my beverage of choice since the water around here is unsuitable to drink.” It wasn’t his drink of choice. He only used it as a prop to reinforce his cover of a bum who could only get a job as a guide.
“But beer? You could purchase juice or soda.” She narrowed her eyes. “What happens if you get drunk and can’t find your way to the dig? We’ll end up stranded in the jungle.”
“I have never become drunk. I drink only when I am thirsty.” The gall of her to imply he didn’t know his way around the jungle. He sneaked a peek at the Government Issue watch with GPS strapped to his left wrist.
“I still think you could make a better choice. Alcohol has a drying effect on the body.”
Tino stabbed her with a you’ve-got-to-be-kidding stare. “What is sticking your clothes to you?” A sheen of perspiration glistened her skin, adding more definition to her collarbone and high cheek bones. His blood heated at the sight. He tamped the sensation down. Doctor Mumphrey wasn’t his type, she was out of his league, and he didn’t make attachments. In his line of work all he could enjoy were one nighters, and she wasn’t the one night type.
Isabella didn’t blush, but the indignant set to her jaw slackened. Her slender fingers unscrewed the lid on the canteen. Closing her eyes, she tipped her head back, and raised the vessel to her lips. Contentment transformed her features to the childlike innocence he’d noticed the night before. She slowly drank, savoring each mouthful and swallowing in slow motion. The effect more erotic than anything he’d seen before.
¡Coño! Tino stared out the window. The sooner he got her to the dig the better. His protective instincts had kicked in. Not good. Once he dropped her off it was adios intriguing señorita.


Secrets of a Mayan Moon is available at Windtree Press / Kindle / Nook / KoboApple.

Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Writing a Character from Another Culture #writing

I tend to have main characters in my stories that are from a culture other than my own. 

I don't know why, but growing up I always was sensitive to other cultures and interested in how they lived. I think it came from living in a white community and only seeing the different cultures on television and in books that I read that piqued my curiosity.

Now as a writer, I can explore the different lives and cultures and then add that newly discovered information into my books.

In Miner in Petticoats, Ethan falls for a Scottish widow. Reading about the Scots and how she would have ended up in America in the 1800's was a fun walk into the Scot and Irish history. I listened to Scots people talking to get a flavor of the language and read a couple of Scottish tales to get a feel for their culture and how they interact. While writing this book I listened to Celtic music.

Tamkaliks Powwow
My spirit books allowed me to research and become more knowledgeable about the Nez Perce, specifically the band that wintered and summered in the county where I grew up. I was lucky enough to connect with a couple of Nez Perce members who guided me through my questions where I told the of the scene I wished to write and was it true to their heritage and not offensive. I've said several times that the spirit books are the books of my heart. I tend to have strong feelings about justice and most of books have that theme. I took that interest in the Nez Perce and made my amateur sleuth in the Shandra Higheagle Mysteries half Nez Perce. My guided tour of the Colville reservation in Washington opened my eyes to even more about the culture and how they perceive themselves and how others perceive them. This information will be helpful in the next mystery book I'm formulating. As a sensory person I listen to Native American music as I write books about that culture.
  
Tino
And then there is Tino Constantine from my Isabella Mumphrey action adventure series. He is a hot Venezuelan DEA agent. When I started the Isabella books I wanted a hero who was a complete opposite of my heroine. I’d been visiting with a woman who had married a Venezuelan and had lived there for several years. Hearing about her life as an outsider and the way the men of Venezuela treated a woman, I thought giving my hero that background would make for an interesting contrast to my genius, privately schooled heroine.

What I didn’t realize that while building Tino’s background I would throw in government turmoil(in Venezuela) his family fleeing that country and his teen and adult years being spent in the United States. With this as his background, I could give him the macho attitudes of the Latin men but also have him more tolerant of the heroine’s independence because he had lived in the states. His Latin machismo comes out when he is fighting his attraction to the skinny, brainy woman he wouldn't usually look twice at. While writing these books I listened to the music of the books' settings- Mayan, Aztec, and Native American.

The book I am currently writing is again one where I have to learn about another culture. Claiming a Heart the third book in the Halsey Homecoming trilogy begins in an underground Chinese community. I've been reading books written about the Chinese in America at that time and their underground and above ground communities. To write this book I downloaded traditional Chinese music.

By having the music of a specific culture playing in the background, I stay grounded in that culture while writing.

Do you like books that teach you about other cultures? Do you like to listen to music from other cultures?

Monday, December 29, 2014

Tough Female Characters by DV Berkom

Not long ago, I had an interesting conversation with a male reader about women characters taking the lead in the thriller genre. He’s been around the block a time or two, and is a voracious thriller reader who has read tons of both traditionally and indie published thrillers, and I value his opinion. He’d just been introduced to Leine Basso, the protagonist in my second series, and mentioned in passing that Leine was what he deemed a “tough broad” and, although the protagonist’s domain in traditional thrillers has typically been a men’s-only club, he thoroughly enjoyed reading about a woman who was as tough and accomplished as any male character.

And that got me thinking.

I write strong female characters because I haven’t found that kind of protagonist in the books I like to read. Yes, I’ve read action-adventure novels with female protagonists written by both male and female writers, but of those I’ve read I always seem to come away with two main complaints: either the character is some guy’s fantasy where, for all intents and purposes, she’s a man in a woman’s body and has the emotional depth of a teaspoon, or she’s tough as nails and self-sufficient until a good-looking man comes along. Then she turns into starry-eyed goo, or worse, lets the guy take over the fighting/sleuthing/whatever. Personally, I’m looking for a strong female action-adventure protagonist who kicks people’s asses without apology but also acts like a real human being, with all the inherent flaws. And don’t get me started on the air-brushed babes who can run in heels without falling and who are never without their lipstick. Ugh. Who can identify with that?

Obviously, not me :-D .(Seriously. You do not want to see me try to run in heels. Or maybe you do–it’s pretty hilarious…the things I do for research.)

The Body Market, my third Leine Basso thriller, ticks all those boxes. Like I said, I want to read about women who can take care of themselves physically as well as mentally, and I figured a former assassin would be an intriguing character to explore. In the first book of the series, Serial Date, we’re introduced to Leine as she’s trying to escape her old life and live a somewhat normal existence. Of course, I couldn’t let that happen and she’s dragged back in, having to fall back on her “talents” in order to save her daughter.

The second book in the series, Bad Traffick, brings her more in line with finding her true calling when she joins forces with an anti-trafficking organization, and The Body Market (#3), takes things even further. In all 3 books, I delve into how difficult it is for Leine to let go and love someone because of the guilt she feels for having worked as a hired killer by exploring her relationships, including her attraction to LAPD homicide detective, Santiago Jensen. Leine has her own reasons for mistrusting pretty much everybody, and Santiago has a hard time reconciling the fact that she used to kill people for a living.

Yeah, there’s a little tension there.

When I put out the request to my friends for a recommendation on strong female leads who kick butt (call me twisted, but I LOVE it when a woman defends herself physically in books and movies, and comes out on the winning end of things) and are as accomplished as a traditional male thriller character but has some depth, I got several recommendations. From the ones I’ve researched so far, only a couple of them meet the criteria. But, I’ve still got a few to look at, so I’m hopeful. My dream is that soon, that kind of female character won’t be so elusive.

What about you? Do you have a favorite female lead in a book you’ve read who can stand toe-to-toe with the Jack Reachers and Joe Pikes of the genre?
  
The Body Market is available for pre-order and will be released January 8, 2015. Currently on sale for $0.99, after publication the price will increase to $3.99.

Everything’s for sale…

Former assassin Leine Basso is hired by a wealthy Beverly Hills power couple to find their missing daughter, Elise, who was last seen partying with her boyfriend at a club in Tijuana. At first, police believe the two teenagers are the victims of a carjacking. But when Leine finds their missing vehicle with the boyfriend’s mutilated body inside, and the local cartel warns her away, she knows if Elise isn’t already dead, she will be soon, or worse.

In the lethal world of organized crime, there’s always a worse.

As Leine races to uncover the reason behind Elise Bennett’s disappearance, she must also battle the powerful interests fighting to keep her from the truth.

Excerpt:
The man in the passenger seat emerged first. Dressed head to toe in black, his Fu Manchu mustache and goatee gave him a mildly evil appearance, although a beer belly the size of the Bronx somewhat ruined the look.
Herrera turned toward him, hands at his sides where both men could see them. The driver hopped out of the jacked-up truck and stood near the golden front grill, leaving the door open. Several inches shorter and just as heavy as the other man, he wore a Hawaiian shirt, black jeans with spit-shined cowboy boots, a flashy watch, and a major attitude. Leine deepened her breathing in order to slow the adrenaline dump into her veins.
“Ignacio,” Herrera said, acknowledging Fu Manchu. Ignacio inclined his head but didn’t smile.
“Who’s your friend?” Ignacio asked, nodding at Leine. The driver leaned against the fender, silent.
“The parents of a missing girl hired her to investigate her disappearance.”
Ignacio’s lips curled into a smile. “An investigator, eh? Maybe she’ll want to investigate this.” He grabbed his crotch and leered.
Leine cocked her head but didn’t say anything, gauging the distance between them. The guy would be easy. Herrera could take out the driver. Plausible scenario, but she wasn’t excited about the fallout. When Ignacio didn’t get the reaction he was expecting, his mouth curved down into what could only be described as a pout.
“Our mutual friend is not happy,” he said, speaking to Herrera but still looking at Leine. “Just this morning he said to me, ‘Ignacio, you must be sure that this woman is escorted safely from our city. We wouldn’t want something terrible to happen to her while she is here.’” Ignacio removed his sunglasses and stared at Leine. His gaze held the hint of menace.
“Tell our mutual friend that he has nothing to worry about,” Herrera replied. “As I said, she is here at the request of the parents of a missing teenager. Nothing more.”
“Why doesn’t she speak?” Ignacio asked, irritation apparent in his voice. “Doesn’t she understand Spanish?”
“I understand Spanish very well,” Leine answered. “I just didn’t feel the need to add to what he said.” Or antagonize an asshole who clearly doesn’t respect women.
“You are wise, señora.” Ignacio brushed his hand against his hip and briefly lifted his shirt, flashing the butt of a pistol.
“I hear the lines are very long at the border,” he said, watching her intently. “You may want to get there early so that you have no problems returning home.” He turned to Herrera with a smile and saluted. “Have a good day, my friend.”
Ignacio returned to the Suburban and climbed inside. His silent sidekick did the same. The driver revved the engine, turned the SUV around, and slowly drove away. Leine and Herrera watched them leave.
“Well, that was enjoyable,” Herrera said.
“I assume the mutual friend he referred to is Otero?”
Herrera nodded. “Yep.”
“You did say he’d have me watched. I’m surprised he sent someone to warn me away.”
“Me too.” Herrera frowned. “In fact, I’m more than surprised. Otero isn’t usually so ham-fisted.” He glanced at Leine. “Santa never did give me your background.”
Leine shrugged. “I worked security for a low-level diplomat for a few years, but that shouldn’t have raised any flags.” There was no way that Otero could have found any information about her previous profession. She’d had a friend in her old agency do a series of high-level background checks on her. Nothing had come up. At least that was one thing Eric hadn’t lied about. Her old boss had promised to scrub her past when she left the business. Apparently, he’d kept his promise.
“Obviously, Otero feels threatened by my presence. How far do you think I can push things without turning this into an international incident?”
“His sending Ignacio and his BFF tells me there’s more to the story. I’d watch your back from this point on.” Herrera scanned the development. “I think we’ve done all we can do here.”
Leine sighed. “I really hate it when someone threatens me.”
Herrera squinted at her. “Santa told me you had a rebellious streak. I’d be remiss if I didn’t strongly advise against antagonizing Felix Otero or Ignacio. But, you gotta do what you gotta do. Just don’t make my job harder, okay?”
“I’ll do my best.”

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DV Berkom is a slave to the voices in her head. As the author of two popular thriller series (Leine Basso and Kate Jones), her love of creating resilient, kick-*ss female characters stems from a lifelong addiction to reading spy novels, mysteries, and thrillers, and longing to find the female equivalent within those pages.

Raised in the Midwest, she received her BA in political science from the University of Minnesota and promptly moved to Mexico to live on a sailboat. Many, many cross-country moves later, she now lives near Seattle, Washington with the love of her life, Mark, a former-chef-turned contractor, and writes every chance she gets.

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