Writing mysteries by Marjorie Thelen
I write the kind
of books I like to read. I read a lot of mysteries but many are straight plot.
I like a little relationship with my mystery so I always have a female
protagonist with a male love interest or partner-in-crime. And it is hard for
me to be serious so there‘s a little humor thrown
Designer Detective, my latest mystery,
will be out for e-readers December 1, 2012 on Amazon and other online
retailers. This is a mystery I wrote to entertain my Australian friend, Bronwen
Porter, who is an interior designer and who loved my first two mysteries, The Forty Column Castle and The Hieroglyphic Staircase. It was fun
writing to entertain her because she likes the humor in my books. After she
read an advance copy of Designer
Detective, she said, “I love Fiona, but she’s not Australian. She’s
American!” So Fiona Marlowe, the main character in the book, became
Irish-American and seems to be just as happy.
I tell people I
write beach books which are considered commercial fiction. They definitely are
not literary fiction. I will not win a Pulitzer prize for my mysteries. They do
not deliver any heavy messages. I write to entertain myself and, hopefully, my
readers. The first two books are part of a series called Mystery-in-Exotic-Places. The first, The Forty Column Castle, was set on the island of Cyprus. The
second, The Hieroglyphic Staircase,
was set in Copan, Honduras. I’ve visited both places and knew they’d make a
great setting for mystery and romance.
Designer Detective is set in MacLean in
Northern Virginia, where I used to live. MacLean is one of the posh suburbs of
Washington DC. Fiona Marlowe is interior designer to the rich and powerful and
one day finds her wealthy old client, Albert Lodge, dead on the floor of his
library. As the investigation unfolds, Fiona discovers she has detective
talent, and her innate curiosity spurs her into sticking her nose where it does
not belong. Albert’s eighty year old eccentric sister, Opal, arrives from her
ranch in south eastern Oregon to settle the estate. She has talked her ranch
hand, Jake Manyhorses, into the role of private investigator as she is
convinced one of the numerous family members murdered Albert for his money.
With Opal's encouragement Fiona joins Jake in the investigation as it spirals
into the netherworld of betrayal, blackmail and smuggling, none of which Jake
or Fiona bargained for when they said yes to helping Opal solve the mystery of
Albert’s demise.
Here’s the first
page from Designer Detective:
The private
investigator introduced himself as Jake.
“I understand you’re an
interior decorator,” he said.
“Designer. I don’t just decorate I
design living space,” I said.
He cast his eyes around the room
like maybe he didn't understand me right, like I'm glad you're not my interior
designer.
“Okay, I know the place is a mess.
I'm busy. I lead an active life. I travel a lot. But that’s not why you’re
here.”
We sat on my beige leather couch.
His knees didn't quite fit between the couch and the black lacquer coffee
table, overloaded with books and empty coffee cups that hadn't made it to the
dishwasher. He spread his legs wide in the way only a man can do. His thighs
were big, and his Levis fit tight. I like the curve of a man's thigh so I
sneaked a discreet glance when he wasn't looking. I didn't think he noticed.
“I understand you found the deceased
when you went to his house this morning.”
“Yes. I have a key. I let myself in
because he leaves for work before I arrive.”
“What time was that?”
“After eleven.”
“Then you arrived late in the
morning.”
“Yes.” I smiled like it was normal
to report to work after eleven in the morning. I am not an early riser.
“Did you notice anything out of the
ordinary?”
I thought that one over and felt a
need to explain. “I was in a rush this morning and got held up in traffic. When
I arrived at the Lodge estate, parked in the drive, ran through the downpour,
struggled with the key in a Byzantine lock, banged open the door and shook off,
I was in a foul mood. Finding Albert Lodge on the floor of the library was the
final nail in the coffin, you might say. I wasn't at my most observant.”
My writing space
is where I live -- on a small ranch outside the frontier town of Burns, Oregon
with a collection of critters, a retired husband, and endless volunteer
opportunities. The big skies, wide open spaces and freezing winds are conducive
to the writing life for me. My background is pretty eclectic. I have an
undergraduate degree in Latin American studies and have traveled and lived in
the region. I speak fluent Spanish and have studied Latin, Russian, French and
Portuguese. I like languages as they are the key to understanding other
cultures which have always fascinated me. For a while I had a career with the
League of Women Voters working in their Latin American programs. Then I decided
to go back to school and got an MBA in marketing and finance. That landed me a
ten year career working in sales and marketing for Exxon Company USA. I changed
careers again to marketing consulting for small businesses for a while then
went on to financial management for a software firm then on to a non-profit
where I was responsible for all the money going into and out of their Latin
American programs. In the late eighties while going from career to career I
started my first novel, a science fiction adventure. It wasn’t until ten years
later and realizing that I wasn’t getting any younger that I started seriously
writing with a daily goal. I finished an historical romance novel set in
Galveston, Texas, two science fiction novels and after that it was mysteries. I
tried for a long time to get published by the New York publishing gods, but
when that didn’t work I became an indie publisher, am having a great time, and
like the artistic control. If you like a good mystery, take a look at Designer Detective and my other
mysteries. They’re like a vacation that'll take you places you'll want to go,
or you can take them with you on vacation. You can learn more about Marjorie and her books at her website: www.marjoriethelen.com
10 comments:
Write on, Marjorie! This is a very nice sneak-peek into the book. I like the hook, and that you want to write a romantic mystery. I hope it sells well. Many good vibes for its success.
Marjorie: You are so lucky to have seen so much of the world. I'd like to set some of my stories in exotic locations, but have only traveled the US and parts of Canada.
Marjorie, I don't want to read a book with a heavy message. I want to be entertained, and your book sounds perfect.
Paty, when did you change some of your bookcovers? They look nice.
Jennifer, Barbara & Caroline. Thank you for your comments. Barbara, there are many exotic places in the US and Canada. My next mystery-in-exotic places will be set in Bryce Canyon National Park in Utah among the hoodoos. Let you imagination run wild! Caroline, amen to entertainment. Enjoy!
Hi Marjorie! I really enjoyed the sneak peak. Here's to many, many sales!
Hi Marjorie! I really enjoyed the sneak peak. Here's to many, many sales!
Caroline, Which covers? Secrets of a Mayan Moon had a slight make over. The rest have been done for a while.
sounds like a great book!
I definitely have to pick this up. I lived NEAR, not in, MacLean, VA in the 1980's (couldn't afford to live there). I also like mysteries. This sounds like a "cozy". Is that how you would describe the type of mystery books you write? I'm also interested in the Mystery in Exotic Places series. I love learning about places I've never been. Going to B&N to see if they are available for my NOok.
Hi Maggie, thanks for your comment. A friend describes my mysteries as lighthearted, romantic comedies. They certainly are not crime novels. The first two books are up on B & N. Designer Detective should be up next week. It is on Amazon today (Nov 29) and B & N takes a little longer. Keep in touch, Marjorie
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